Voting Question: What do you see wrong with this resume please please help?

29 January 2012, 3:51 pm

I just recently moved to California and i am unable to get a job i tried everything and, im starting to think its my resume what do you think? what should i change or add? P.s Some of this Information is not real i altered it a bit to protect my identity. Breena S. Smith 1674 Kytell, San Diego, CA 92139 Telephone: 1(313)555-6813 Cell: 1(313)555-7111 Email:Breanathomas55@ymail.com OBJECTIVE: My objective is to obtain a position at your establishment which tests my ability to become successful and challenge me to use all of my skills. EMPLOYMENT HISTORY: McDonald's Food Prep Kalamazoo, MI 04/2009-09/2011 Making sure all food items was stowed properly and prepped prior to leaving at end of shift and throughout the work day also maintaining proper sanitation. Annette Daycare Lansing, MI 06/2006-12/2010 Duties are as follows: Planning field trips, feeding, and provide educational studies maintaining proper care of children. Customized Styles Warren, NM 04/2008-09/2011 Receptionist my job was to answer phones, Make appointments, keep the Business organized and, greet clients. Highlights: · I’m a people person. · I’m hard worker. · I’m energetic. ·I’m a leader. ·I have a great personality. ·I’m always on time. · I love to smile. ·I’m a good listener. · I’m fast learner. Education: South Eastern High School 09/2006-06/2010 General Studies Summary: I’m a 19 year old hard working person, Excellent at juggling multiple tasks and working under pressure. I’m a leader, fast learner and great at whatever I do. I have experience in Childcare, Front Desk Clerk, Cleaning and Food Management. I am unemployed and looking for work due to my relocation... Read More »